THIS IS NOT FICTION!!!

Comics - ch 02: pg 30 (24 Apr 2008 12:30 am)

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author comments: bunkun, 24 Apr 2008 12:30 am

I...I'm late...:-[ I didn't feel like drawing iiiiit. My motivation to get the lineart done for this page was, "I'M NOT GONNA COLOR IT (I hate coloring)!" And that's how I finished it. Late. ...
I'm sad about the loss of blinding colors, actually. Well, now that I know I don't like it without color I'll work harder. XD

Lately it sucks, right? Please tell me how to improve this comic (anything except guys doing it LOL). *w*)b

Anyway, uhm. There's gonna be a fight in the next page. SIKE. Wait, no, I'm not sure, I've been changing it as I go. THAT'S HOW CONFUSED I AM AT THIS.

reader comments:

	Aww Did Landon just get 200% cuter on this page? I love the picture of him sleeping (even though he's just as obnoxious). posted by Aubrey (Guest) on 24 Apr 2008 12:42 am
	Landon get out of julie`s beeeed. Woah, okaasan is just too fangirl XD posted by Friederike on 24 Apr 2008 12:47 am
	The blinding colors are this comic�s LIFE, yo. haha just kidding, but it DOES give it that distinguishing "TINF" look 8D posted by MakiTakami on 24 Apr 2008 12:49 am
	I know what you mean about being confused about what will happen on the next page. T_T Happens all the time with me! SOB posted by nozmo on 24 Apr 2008 12:53 am
	I don't think there has been any dip in quality. :D If you want, you could always update more frequently. wink wink It kills me having to wait for these pages. ;P posted by Tteok on 24 Apr 2008 12:57 am
	I love this comic no matter what you do with it, really. I enjoy the colors, but it might make it more enjoyable for you if you only do some of them in color, depending on time and your mood. Also, I love Jul's mom heaps. posted by MoreMagic (Guest) on 24 Apr 2008 01:51 am
	The colors added zest but your art style is what we love. Heh XD Keepz it up <3 posted by kuroi_hitsuji on 24 Apr 2008 05:54 am
	lol, I sleep at other peoples houses. : \| Sometimes I purposely go to other peoples houses so I can sleep there. D: Mine is just waaaaaaay to noisy. XD I like the comic as it is. : ) It's very nice and it's always very funny! I'd keep at what you're doing, any improvements that have to made will usually happen by themselves. : ) BUT, when I saw this pad had no colors that'd kill my retinas, I was somewhat sad. ;o;! posted by 3eoclock on 24 Apr 2008 06:23 am
	SHUT UP NICOLE THIS PAGE IS BEAUTIFUL OH MY GOD Landon's little hand in the first panellll and and and Jul's mom and LAN'S FACE IN EVERY PANEL OH MY GOSH Landon please live in Jul's bed and make forts in there and don't ever come out. ~~please~~ posted by dolleface (Guest) on 24 Apr 2008 06:25 am
	What ever you make is beautiful. Just do whatever makes you happy C: posted by Toasted Jelly on 24 Apr 2008 07:25 am
	is the next page a fight between Isaiah and Juls about who gets to sleep with Landon I mean nothing stop being lazy use colours gosh it's not like making a comic is stressful. this is actually excellent posted by Hotpan on 24 Apr 2008 07:26 am
	Haha, it's okay whether or not you color these pages as long as you keep updating. <333 Mrs. Drees is so cute. :3 posted by inkblot on 24 Apr 2008 07:33 am
	God, I need one of those random 'Best Bay Ever,' banners. That would be so awesome! Julian needs to take a chill pill! Who doesn't let their friends sleep on their beds? They're absolutely comfy! Now stop for a minuet. I find that this comic is not 'sucking' what so ever. On the contrary, I think it's getting better! I love how the characters play out along with the story. It's so flowing! My advice (which means you don't have to take it :P) is to try and listen to music. Seriously. Listen to music that you haven't heard before! You never know! You may be able to come out of your writer's (comic's ?) block! I hope for the best! We're right by your side! Good luck and keep on drawing! posted by Angelicus on 24 Apr 2008 07:34 am
	Well i think you're doing a great job. A little color might help of course. What ever happened to Bijarr though? Oh well, youre doing great on your own, who needs that slacker!!! thumbs up posted by Super Kitty Haz Cheezburgr (Guest) on 24 Apr 2008 08:38 am
	Aw man, I feel like such a tard! I'm all "dude.. something is like.. MAJORLY different..but I dunno..what it....reads comment OMG! COLOUR!" 8D XD ahahaha;;; yah.. maybe I shouldn't admit something like that.. sigh I love the comic either way though♥ XD posted by PyroPanda (Guest) on 24 Apr 2008 10:17 am
	The blinding colours really work a treat XD Makes your pages shine with character. Though through pages like this its clear that that't not its only virtue =3 Your lineart has real style posted by H0lyhandgrenade on 24 Apr 2008 11:29 am
	LOL His mother cracks me the f- up >XDDD Landon is the kind of kid I would have strangled with piano wire if I'd known him in school ahaha XDD But he still manages to be oddly charming DAMN HIM. It is awesome with color, but it still looks good without it, so don't feel bad if you just can't bring yourself to color it sometimes ^.^; PS....strawberries and milk? o___o posted by amiko_16 on 24 Apr 2008 02:39 pm
	the color does give it some flair and uniqueness, but the quality without it doesn't really change. i miss the rainbows though. /sob posted by tsuyatsuya on 24 Apr 2008 02:53 pm
	Ahahaha, oohhhh, oh god that's amazing. XD He's just like a Sim! Invites himself in, eats the food served, and then just goes to sleep where he pleases. That's so adorable. XD <333 (next i think he should definitely go streaking like a sim, too) posted by Rizu on 24 Apr 2008 04:36 pm
	Strawberries and milk: The best way to celebrate any occasion. Wook at Isaiwa's widdle faacey-poo~ (hack) I-I'm sorry. That was just strange. @A@ I-It's not sucky at ALL! Really, you're wayyy too hard on yourself, Bunkun. I wish I was just half as amazing as you, because... the truth is... I LOVE YOU. As a BBFIJNH (best buddy friend I just now have). posted by Striped Orange Socks on 24 Apr 2008 05:14 pm
	Guys doing it. LOL posted by Keki on 24 Apr 2008 05:29 pm
	Mrs. Drees is like a little kid! It's so cute ;u; Also, strawberries and milk is delicious :D posted by Lark on 24 Apr 2008 06:07 pm
	How does one..."make" strawberries and milk? Ha. She's crazy. posted by Remmy on 24 Apr 2008 09:10 pm
	I love Landon just the way his is. <3 posted by r-chama on 24 Apr 2008 11:49 pm
	This is WIN!! And omg... Juuls is like his mom? I'd be so pwning that man like a pro it'd be sick. Your style is awesome, and as everyone else has said, the color adds character and awesome, but it's more like the icing on the cake, and so long as we have your cake who needs icing? posted by desertkitt on 25 Apr 2008 12:44 am
	And I quote myself: HOW DO YOU EXPECT ME TO BELIEVE LANDON IS STRAIGHT!? posted by Engelen on 25 Apr 2008 11:20 pm
	Fourth panel omg their eating faces... <3 +I bet Landon just wants to smell Julian's pillow... >:D ++I WILL COLOUR FOR YOU?! !! TT^TT posted by Eddykins (Guest) on 27 Apr 2008 04:55 pm
	i do that all the time (lay down in my friends beds that is) but seeing some1 else do it kinda strange. im still ganna do it though. as 4 the advice/critisisam i dont see ne thing wrong with it but the artist knows best with those kinds of thing i guess. when im having trouble with my art there is nothing i can really do but force myself to keep drawling and it usually passes and dont get depressed about ur art ur style is what attracted me to this comic in the first place!<---(exclamation point mean im 4 real). and about the story i think its fine if u change some of the pages as u go as long as it doesn't change the over all story line. Spontaneous=funny. go with it. posted by jmegrl17 on 27 Apr 2008 07:24 pm
	thanks everyone!!! ;w;) <3<3<3 @Eddy: I WOULD LOVE IF YOU WERE MY ASSISTANT. Love it...absolutely love it. ;w;)b posted by bunkun on 27 Apr 2008 09:00 pm
	GOD HIS MOM IS ADORABLE XDDD Nooo your comic doesn't suck, hasn't sucked and will never suck. I love it to deeattthhh <3 ;____; posted by fishuu on 28 Apr 2008 03:36 pm
	My email's on the memberlist on bongjiBBS (lazy OTL), so hit me up with a .psd when you want me to colour! ^3^ posted by Eddykins (Guest) on 29 Apr 2008 02:32 pm
	my friend does the exact same thing as landon when she comes over she eats my food, then goes to sleep in my bed posted by bairey (Guest) on 30 Apr 2008 04:37 pm
	I've never heard of someone eating strawberries in milk. But they look so cute eating it! (I guess I've been missing out this whole time...) posted by tamrunsfree on 01 May 2008 03:01 pm
	omg! this is so hilarious! XD posted by LonenessAngel on 01 May 2008 05:35 pm
	I just love this comic! hmmmmmm....ways to improve it? I love how self-centered Landon is and how he irritates Julian. But you already portray that very well. Your characters really rock. You could add in more problems- that's what drive the stories after all. Maybe Julian could go through a whole list of people who each get him closer to meeting the author - the mother of a friend of a friend of a friend, however it went - and each person could want something from him in exchange. Landon would probably volunteer him for all sorts of things. Or Julian's mother does something to encourage his 'friendships' like throw him a party. Are these the sorts of suggestions you're looking for? because what you're already doing is brilliant! posted by listersgirl (Guest) on 02 May 2008 02:05 am
	@listersgirl: YES. Those are the kind of suggestions I like!!! Those are great ideas, I might just use that! Thanks so much! <3 posted by bunkun on 02 May 2008 09:59 am
	I adore this comic!! XDD It's awesome!! It's such a happy story, I couldn't stop LOLing at almost every page! XDD And the drawings! Wow, I really love your style! And the colors give it such a nice and refreshing feeling! u I've become a fan! (<3 Landon) >w< Please keep it up, bunkun and bijarr! You rock! ;3 About suggestions..you can also introduce new characters and deepen the friendship between the 3 of them :3 also, you could focus a little more on Isaiah's lifestyle to know him better :D! And what about the stereotypical cliches? XDDD Going to the beach, getting lost in a forest, going to a haunted house, a girl's confession XDD things like that! It's fun to see how different authors portrait this kind of situations :p! Of course, it's all up to you guys n.n~ Good luck and keep it up! posted by Heldrad on 04 May 2008 12:26 am
	Awwwww His mum is adorable!! X3 posted by Meaju on 04 May 2008 05:58 am
	I lol'd at BEST DAY EVER posted by tayburger on 04 May 2008 11:28 pm
	Awwww his mom is so cute! like a little kid with a new toy x3 posted by Casamie on 05 May 2008 06:29 pm
	SUGGESTION: Have Landon reveal himself as Sydney Morgon! Omfugg I've been thinking that since forever, lol. Another: keep putting cutsie-borderline-boylove scenes in there, it'll wet our appetites <3 posted by Junn (Guest) on 05 May 2008 07:17 pm
	oh man strawberries and cream sounds like a blast at Julian's house posted by korrected on 08 May 2008 07:32 pm
	Roffle Copter! That sorta happened to me once when I was at my friends house. His mom thought I was his girlfriend or something, and she kept saying 'Oh my god! You brought home a girl!' Julian's mom is awesome. :0 posted by C-O-L-O-R-B-L-I-N-D (Guest) on 14 May 2008 07:36 am
	Bahaha, thats something one of my friends would do. C: posted by PoisonAndCinderella on 30 Nov 2008 11:34 am
	I LOLED so much when Julies Mom said "I'll go make strawberries and milk" Was the strawberries part a subliminal message? xD posted by xiluBaka on 09 Jul 2009 03:11 pm (post a comment)